By: Chris

Chris — Sat, 28 Feb 2009 06:13:07 +0000

I’m reminded of a Gary Larson cartoon (Far Side) in which a child is terroised by a “Floating Head of Death”… In this instance, there are 5 “Floating Heads” (yeah, I’m not a fan of deepetched heads)..
As for the variation in skin tone from left to right, you should’ve colour corrected the images.
There is also an issue with the space between the letter “T” and “e” in the word “Team” – you should’ve kerned the letters (adjusted the spacing).
Also, if you’re intending to “copy write”, you need to pay attention to your brand values – This is the case with your use of the words “Dream” and “Team” – either capitalise the first letter, or don’t – whatever your decision make it consistant.
I like the image of the rink at the bottom, but surely you could’ve incorporated the “Floating Heads of Death” into the image, either as a reflection or watermark…

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By: Chris